Comatose meanderings...
Something’s amiss
not sure what it is
There’s an emptiness still lingering inside of me
not sure what the source is
Trying to banish it out
but it won’t go away
Trying to fathom why ’tis there
finding no answer, I lie awake all night
Tossing and turning, with my heart burning
tears falling, I let it stay…
maybe because I don’t want it to go away?!?!
not sure what it is
There’s an emptiness still lingering inside of me
not sure what the source is
Trying to banish it out
but it won’t go away
Trying to fathom why ’tis there
finding no answer, I lie awake all night
Tossing and turning, with my heart burning
tears falling, I let it stay…
maybe because I don’t want it to go away?!?!
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what i loved was
?!?! (at the end of the poem)- a representation of amaze and ignorance.